Monday, March 1, 2010
My second bro
I have two brothers in my life. One is my older brother and his friends. We have been known each other for four years. He is also an international student like us and he came to Canada a week later after we came to Canada. We all had differnet personality but becuase of few common things, we closed each other in short period. We went to same school and church. We always together so we know each other very well. Our truth never betray ourselves. When i had hard time, he always beside of me and helped me to figure out how to solve these questions. Him and i also had affection for a while. When it ends, i felt really sad but i could understand him so it didn't really matter to me. After that happening, i got real brother. He is as same as my brother now. He promised me oneday. If my brother is not beside on me then he will protects me from dangerous situation. I really appreciate that he is my friend and brother.
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Beautiful post, Helen! It's good that you have so many supporting brother-like figures around you to help you whenever you need it. Since you're such a pretty girl, it's obvious that these boys would have feelings for you, so just be aware of your boundaries.
ReplyDeleteThe sentence flow of this paragraph was very good and I understood exactly what you meant. However, you have a few errors, just minor mistakes.
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I have two brothers in my life. One is my older brother, the other is my brother's friend. We've known each other for four years. He's also an international student like who came a week after we did. We all have different personalities but because we have many things in common, we grew close over a short period of time. We went to the same school and church. We're always together so we know each other very well, and very supportive of each other. Whenever I'm having a hard time, he's always there to help me figure out my problems. We grew so close that we became more than friends. However, it ended. Although I'm sad I understand how he feels. Afterwards, I met someone else who treated me like a little sister. He told me he would always be there to support me and protect me. I really appreciate that I have a friend and brother like him.